Friday, February 20, 2015

College Essay

College Essay

I think that my future is important.  I have big expectations, so does everyone in my family. They think I’m special and I deserve a good college experience.  My world is all about trying to succeed and helping others. I want to be recognized. I want someone to know my name. Fame isn't everything but not being just another girl would be amazing, and I know this because I have a goal of going to college.

My future is big. I have some goals. I wish to write, sing, and draw these are the things that are important to me and my future. I live in a world and my world is in a trailer house with two kids and two parents and they never went to college, but I think they are regretting that. My plans are to go to a good school and get a good education so that I can get a good paying job that will help me support a family. This college experience would help me succeed in the world.

I want to be the best I can be and I’m going to need help to get there it seems impossible but its not. College is going to help me reach the top its not going to be easy but with some help I can make it and succeed in life. This is so important to me and I want to succeed I haven't had the best influences in my life but college with me has to happen I will need classes to help me with my singing and other classes to help with my writing and art. College is so important.

My family has big expectations for me they push me to do good to get good grades, I want these things but I need help too. My parents never went to college my dad didn’t even graduate high school I don't want to be like that. My aunt Kayla inspires me because she went to college and got the job she wanted and didn't go far from home she encourages me to follow my dreams because i can be what I want to be and no one can make me do anything its my decision but I want people to help me. My aunt Nicole from my moms side she is the worst influence after she went to high school she got several boy friends and started doing drugs, she got her children taken away and my family can not see them. I don't want that I want to go to college and succeed and thats what my parents want for me and other family members too they want me to be able to support my family and succeed.

My life is all about family and friends and trying to fit in but it hasn't always been the best life. I want to live my life to the fullest my family hasn't been the best example but I think if they would have had a family like mine they would have gone to college. I don't have the best life but 
I have one that supports me and my decisions.

By: Melody


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